Early Abstract Revisions
Most of you have done a good job with this, although some further tweaking of the initial output will be required. Overall, the thing that most of you have to watch out for is "wordiness," and also the usage of complicated, or esoteric academic jargon that can very easily be replaced with simpler, cleaner forms of expression. Although there will be times when academic terms will have to be used, in most of the cases that I pointed out to you today, this usage was unnecessary. What you have to say is much better expressed in words that are "your own." Another thing that it will be good to watch out for are overlong sentences, that can easily be broken into shorter ones.